Hello Bloggers again!!!
Welcome back to my blog, I am going to be showing you a piece of my Writing.Its the connective's and, because, but ,and so, so the challenging part of my writing was thinking and putting the word down we only did the words in the blue.
I am proud of my work because I got it down also I was really proud and my proud bit was also what I liked about it too.
I'm super proud of my work: Super awesome idea 1 was the first part idea 2 was the second part of this piece of my writing and my connective part's was what I wrote I had to choose and, because, but, so.
Also about my writing I have a question what should I do or add to make my blog better.
Kia ora Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteLearning to use these conjunctions is really important for our writing so thank you for sharing. To make your blog post better? Hmmm I wonder if you could explain how these conjunctions work and why we should use them when writing.
Mrs Taylor :)
Kia ora Miss Taylor
ReplyDeleteAn example of using a connective is like with ´I jumped over...´ ´And´ is the connective. So, ´I jumped over and sat down.´
I´ve got a question. I think I need to add more full stops and better adjectives and maybe use a simile and to not rush this. Do you think so?
Thanks for commenting on my blog.
From Mikayla :)