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For my work today I had to change the bad word or 2 to a adjective and highlight I then I had to improve it. Took 10 minutes. It was fun but it toook awhile. When we highlight our work he change it to any colour I chose a mix of colours I made sure I chose the whole rainbow you can douple check any ways we had 3 to do in the 10 minutes and we had to do awesome adjective or it can't re place for the other one way better. example the nice dog was playing in the park to the amzing dog was playing in the park I wanted to do but I forgot is the amzing dog was playing in the awesome park or playground.so it was improve the adjective's. Also i learnt in this pice of writitng that you change it to a better one like practice makes perfect.You can do this nice than amzing amzing is best sad awesome beautiful is better because awesome beautiful way better 1 to 2 words more.These words where not adjective and I changed them to adjectives big is a horrible adjective for me. adjectives are way better than any narmal one my challenge to do this was to focus on it and do it before break and I just made it out.What I liked about my writing was the adjective's and some douple words like awesome beautiful from the sad one the 2nd and that is what I also proud of to.
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From Mikayla.
Kia ora Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing with us. I agree with you that it is important to understand that some words are more powerful than others. Why do you think it is important to choose these more powerful words when writing? I look forward to hearing your thoughts.
Mrs Taylor :)
Hello Miss Taylor,In my piece of writing I learnt a week or two ago about changing my adjectives from bad to good adjectives It is important to change a word to an important one because it sounds better in your writing.
DeleteMy question is why didnt't we do alll the stuff like similes and alliteration is well? Thanks for vistoring my work
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From Mikayla!