in my reading work today about the ice cream truck i got a heatly ice cream mum will let the kids eat because they are not allowed narmal ice cream so sad i made a starberry one with a flavour of ice cream with sprinckes she will accept. i hope mum lets her eat them also i did this acitivy because it was my favourite one. ice cream ya so if i was you mum lets me eat ice cream even when it is not heatly because it has milk and chocolate in it its good for you bad to where i was it was a can do you can kind of see the starberry and the rest of the ice cream and words i guess starberrys are my favouite so i love them even on ice cream yum even better because it willl also have some ice cream on it of dipped chocolate i also chose this fruit for it because its my favouite and i was like this fruit would be good to make it heatly for the ice cream,.
From Mikayla
Kia ora Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteI love ice cream too! I have to wonder if we can really make ice cream healthy so that we can have it more often. I hear you that fruit is healthy but does adding it to ice cream make the ice cream healthy? Two things for your next blog post. Firstly think about how you can make sure that your readers can see your work if you are using a photo. Secondly remember when writing that I on it's own is always a capital letter. You could edit this post to fix that.
I look forward to seeing more of your fantastic work.
Mrs Taylor :)
Kia ora Mikayla
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put a lot of detail. Did you think about using more full stops? When did you last have an ice cream?
From Zoe