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Sunday, 9 June 2019

I am going to Write about horses

Hi I love horses. They are beautiful. I like riding them.
                         

5 comments:

  1. Hi Mikyala Its Ella¬Pearl From SHS I Like Horses Too! I Also Rid Horses I Went To Pony Party Alot! Maybe Next Time You Can Add More About Horses! What Kind Of Horse Did You Ride?

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    1. Hi Ella-Pearl!

      Thanks for commenting on my blog today.

      I ride a horse named Pippi most of the time.

      I don't know what type of horse she is.

      -Mikayla 😉

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  2. Kia ora Mikayla, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I like your picture of the horse and thanks for sharing what you think about them.

    This reminds me of when I went horse riding. It was really fun and I used to go horse riding in the holidays a lot.

    To improve, you could write a bit more like if you went horse riding you could say the name of the horse.

    Did the teacher help you write this?

    Bye, Mikayla! I'd love to see more amazing blog posts from you, it's just a really good post.

    -Amelia 😉

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    1. Hi Amelia!

      Thanks for taking the time to comment on my blog.

      Yes, the teacher helped me write this blog.

      -Amelia 😉

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  3. Hi Mikayla I'm from St Bernadette's school
    I love horses to they are my favourite animals
    I like how you post about what you're going to write next.
    I also learned that horses's are you're favourit animals like me
    what are you going to write next?

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