and it was a water melon you can eat and i really liked it. you do the summer learning jouring because it helps you in staed of going back a lot of levels and stay where you are it helps you a lot when you comment and blog it helps you go up levels at school after the school hoilday's
here is a comment i made
it was a good comment because iliked the water melon and it was a good one i learnt a lot from it and it was a pretty good water melon and it was good because i said helpful thoughtful and postitive i wrote
Kia Ora Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve written a great comment! I like that you start with the positives, listing what you like about the post! You also were super helpful suggesting that Sonnie could add more writing to better explain why those particular colours were chosen.
Watermelon is such a yummy fruit! They’re one of my all time favourites! What are your favourite fruits?
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Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)